But then I find myself,
Telling me to go on.
Something deep inside,
Urging me to hold on...
That's why I know,
I'll make it.
That's why I show
You, that I dream it.
Under all those dark clouds,
I find me, a silver lined hope.
Under, the past in shrouds,
I found a single thread to grope.
To bring me,
Back to now...
And all thanks to Him,
To show me how.
Cuz, now I know where I am,
And, where I need to be...
And that is my road,
My destiny...
23 comments:
hi lady,
hope ur doin gud.first on a lighter note wa face pack has the the girl in the pic applied on her face.hope ur not getting angry. ok now the poem great cool, the hope is visible, ur destiny waiting to unfold grab the opportunity .
it feels gud to see people rising again when depressed coz in a way it give strength to everyone around not to give up and not stop fighting no matter wat comes ur way.
well, thnx for droppin' by, found ur def useful (in gettin' over any form of depression;) )
gud post... few words, all said, grt :)
Way to go... tempo se :-)
Btw... what did the face pack have to do with the rest of the post?
Pack up the face!!
@ jugs: who's d lady around here (looking around)??? anyways, That I guess was to cool THAT lady down, so that snap cld be taken :p
ya it feels good to rise up... And that kinda inspiration comes from your blog...
thanks girl,
cheers muuuah :)
@ Rich: thanks buddy, I know... I m always ready with defs!!! thanks and see ya again...
@ Sunny: hehehe, cldn't find a better pic on d net, No I like the girl's eyes, u know.
Pretty expressive for what I wanted to say- finding hope( beyond the face pack) :p
cheers, and thanks
@ Abhishek: guys, would u give it a rest with the face-pack already??? sheesh!!!
And maybe its not a face-pack afterall... It might be that lady breaking out of her shell, and reaching out to d world...
aur ab se kisi ne face pe comment kiya to... maa kasam... @##@$%#%$ ho jayega!!!
Hi, Nice one again. You somehow seem to use words better in poems than in replying to some comments out here and in other places?! :)
You have a talent for words. Don't lose it by trying to fit in...
I know you want to kill me now...:)
MA Kasam!!
Voila
( I could actually imagine a girl yelling @ me like that)maybe with a dagger in her hand!!!!
Run abhishek Run!!!!!
hey, i really didnt understand this one much :)
It feels like you don't want to reveal yourself much and so have written something that just skims your feelings :)
What if later on, you read this and don't remember WHY you wrote it? How pathetic will that feel! :O
WEll to be fair i didnt think face pack (just cuz it wasnt green or brown or other funky colors) I thought it was like a mummy waking up after a long rest or something.
The poem or verse was inspiring. Real nice!!
@ dazed: nah don't wanna kill u, just wanna hurt you real bad!!! :)
anyways, thanks I appreciate ur observation that I write better in poetics than in COMMENTS,
Because, poor me!!! How am I supposed to know how some people will take their comments???
chill bro, :p
U got ur say, lemme have mine.
@ abhi: muhahaha, err ahem, MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
@ Elfstone: see, this was for me to get over my dark period. So, the logical consequence(at least for me!) is to NOT remember it. I want it to be just a wisp, a pixie, not to bother me evrytime I am sad, or anything.
Gheuntak!!! :p
@ Aditi: THANK YOU. ladies and gentlemen, the first one to see the meaning behind the face- I present to you,( drumroll) Aditi!!!
u tell them, girl.
k pass.. is this one about a traffic sign? :P
LOL !!! hahahaha
A traffic policeman showing her the way .. too much ROTFL :))
what chori???
Hooooow
hi gal,hope u doin gud, dis shows the confidence u have, long way to go.....
all d best...
Cheers!
:)
yo.. :) new posts up on both blogs ;)...
Vishnu: thanks buddy. I know I sounded like I was in the pits.maybe I really was. But hey, I am up, up , and away!!! :)
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